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I am definitely hungrier after reading this. Hehe. He's one stubborn boy. And what good did it do him? Cool story, Michael.

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Alternate ending:

"That made him even more upset.

They all piled into the car and drove down the road. His burger sat on the floorboard. He pushed it with his toe. Under the front seat it lay: unwrapped, uneaten and unshared.

While his family chattered around him, he stared out the window watching the world pass behind his own reflection.

He had won.

Let the reader understand."

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